Bahaha
Nicely done, man. I enjoyed that very much.
Bahaha
Nicely done, man. I enjoyed that very much.
Wow, bad rotoscoping.
If you're going to rotoscope, at least take the time to do it well and credit the video clip you ripped it off of.
A Story of Bad Flash
Just a few things to point out....
First of all, this is a trailer. Trailers go in the Alphas section. I saw you get unnecessarily pissy at the last guy who said this, but I think it needs pointing out anyways.
The trailer you made is quite repetitive. Perhaps something along the lines of fewer text filler areas and longer animated segments in between them would help this.
Your graphics in this weren't too horrible, but they could use a lot of work. In the first room scene.... details would add greatly to this. A chair or two, a lamp, something on the wall, perhaps? Just a little more time and effort can produce a much more impressive scene. In the shot of the three clocks on the computers, perhaps making the computers different, even slightly so, would help. Also, change the mouse movements of the clocks so that it doesn't look so much like a copy/pasted movie clip. There were a few more details about graphics I had in mind, but they were related to the first ones, so I'll spare you the extra reading.
The music was fairly effective, but I'd suggest looking for a song without MIDI voices like that in it. The clock voices had some variation between them, but were still clock voices.
Lastly, I hope the storyline is developed more before you make the full movie. This was not enough plot to make a full movie out of.
Thank you.
Simply stunning!
This is most definetely the most amazing piece of Flash animation I have ever seen! A score of 1.72 is an atrocity... this should be on the front page!
The time taken making this was time well spent, good sir!
Beautiful...
Short, well made, and definetely worth watching.
I hope that there's a way to include this one along with Da Dinictus's movie.
Me too =) , thanks ...
Brilliant!
Who needs a reason to kick ass? The act of asskicking itself justifies further asskicking.
Now that's Real Ultimate Power.
Nice job... very well done!
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